Domino
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Post by Domino on Oct 29, 2011 11:35:51 GMT -5
Reward Type: New Ability Cost 150 Munny Reward: Blinding Brilliance[/u] For a short period of time, the user's body releases a repeated series of intense flashes of light, not unlike that of a strobe light. This causes a temporary blind status [inhibiting their ability to connect with physical attacks] to all those who let the light enter their gaze. Duration: 1 post Cooldown: 2 posts
[b][u]Blinding Brilliance[/b][/u] [i]For a short period of time, the user's body releases a repeated series of intense flashes of light, not unlike that of a strobe light. This causes a temporary blindness to all those who let the light enter their gaze. [b]Duration: 1 post Cooldown: 2 posts[/b][/i]
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Post by Larxene on Oct 29, 2011 19:52:16 GMT -5
Oh, I really like that. It's pretty much "blind". Interesting name. I think it's pretty fair. 1/3 Approved
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Post by Vincent Valentine on Oct 30, 2011 12:16:34 GMT -5
I think if you want this to actually cause the status effect Blind, (that prevents opponents hitting you with physical/melee attacks for a post but can still hit the same accuracy with spells), then you should state that this ability does so and shortly give the definition of what Blind does (such as what I aforementioned above in the brackets). Because there could be many different interpretations to what 'blinding' your opponent actually means to you or your opponent, and this would clarify things better.
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Domino
Neutral
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Post by Domino on Nov 6, 2011 15:54:10 GMT -5
Modified
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Post by Larxene on Nov 7, 2011 12:26:24 GMT -5
My approval is still the same as before....
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Post by Vincent Valentine on Nov 7, 2011 13:54:24 GMT -5
Much better. 2/3 approved.
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Terra
Keyblader
Vincent's Profile Apprentice[M:50]
The Terrable One
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Post by Terra on Nov 7, 2011 17:03:00 GMT -5
Terra Approved 3/3
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Post by Larxene on Nov 10, 2011 22:14:28 GMT -5
Your new ability has been added to your profile and 150 munny has been removed from your account as payment.
Come Again Soon!
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