Yukimura
Villain
[M:300]
Your darkness belongs to me!
Posts: 101
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Post by Yukimura on Mar 7, 2012 2:58:47 GMT -5
Reward Type: Equipment upgrade Cost 100 Reward: After the constant, grueling battles that Yukimura and Dragon's Fang have endured, the sword has now developed a consciousness that can communicate with others through the use of telepathic communication. This consciousness has developed from a particular battle with a deadly Heartless and, with this new development, comes power of which is to come in the future. (This upgrade is to be used for role play purposes.)
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Post by Vincent Valentine on Mar 9, 2012 7:32:00 GMT -5
This upgrade does two things; has the sword use telepathy on people, and slows your opponent's action speed.
My questions before approving this are:
1. Which ability are you applying for here? They are two completely different things.
2. If it's the slowing down of opponent's action time, why not make things simple and have the sword attempt to inflict Slow for one round upon striking them with your sword? With a cooldown of one post, so you can't repeat it on the same turn, of course.
3. Also, is it possible to name the ability for reference's sake, so your opponent knows when you are using the sword's effect on them? Such as after the sword, Dragon's Fang, or something similar?
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Yukimura
Villain
[M:300]
Your darkness belongs to me!
Posts: 101
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Post by Yukimura on Mar 10, 2012 15:56:07 GMT -5
Alright fixed it up. If there's an issue, I'll fix it. Only the telepathy part of the sword is being left in.
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Post by mordred on Mar 15, 2012 19:16:02 GMT -5
Seems good enough.
1/3 Approved
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Sora
Keyblader
-The Key to Everything-[M:300]
"It's just...they really need me. I have to go. I am who I am, because of them."
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Post by Sora on Mar 15, 2012 19:46:30 GMT -5
2/3 Approved.
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Post by Larxene on Mar 15, 2012 20:23:06 GMT -5
3/3 Approved ---- Your equipment upgrade has been added to your profile and 100 munny has been removed from your account as payment.
Come Again Soon!
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