Dual Elemental Ability Upgrades

[Yukimura]

Ability Upgrade
Cost - 100 Munny
Ability being upgraded: Thunder Burst
Previous Effect: This is a special speed-based ability of Yukimura’s. Through the use of his magic, Yukimura shoots out magic from beneath him, to send him flying at great speed in whichever direction he pleases. Each time he uses this ability, the sound of crashing thunder could be heard. It has a moderate speed, enabling movement of up to 5 times faster than what he could normally run at. (Changed grammar to make it more understandable) Yukimura's normal speed is 13mph, so, through Thunder Burst, that speed is increased to 65mph.

The ability lasts for one moment, due to the fact that it uses very small amounts of magic. He can only take three steps with each time it’s used and. (Raid Reward) Yukimura has increased this ability greatly, increasing the number of steps he can take to 9. must wait 1 post for the spell to recover. (Upgraded as a raid reward on 8th June, 2010.)

New Effect: Yukimura has managed to increase his endurance much more further than before. He now has a time limit of two posts of this high speed ability.

Ability Upgrade
Cost - 100 Munny
Ability being Upgraded: Blessed Flames of Darkness
Targeted Previous After Effect: Yukimura can not move for 1 post, due to the spell straining his body greatly. (Raid reward added 13th of May, 2010, Unity reward of upgraded to non-charging 18th of August, 2011.)

New After Effect: Yukimura's endurance, after his last bout with the warriors of Light, has increased greatly, allowing him to continue fighting after the first time use. If he does not wait and recover his energy for 2 posts in addition after the initial ability cool down, when using it hastily, then he will be strained greatly and not be able to move for 1 post. This state of recovery can allow him to skip the recovery if someone heals him with a spell equivalent or greater than Cura.

[Vincent Valentine]

I think you might need to clear this up a bit more, because I've read through it a few times, and all it seems to serve is confuse me.

- With Thunder Burst, the way I read it was used in raids, is that Yukimura travels at fast bursts between nine steps, and when he finishes his ninth and final step the cooldown of one turn/round starts. Which means effectively, this ability lasts for as many turns as Yukimura likes, so long as he doesn't expend all his steps. Why then, do you want a upgrade that the ability lasts two posts? Isn't that more a restriction, and thus a downgrade?

- Blessed Flames of Darkness: Yukimura doesn't need to stop and rest for an additional turn after he first uses this, I get that part. But when you say 'If he does not wait and recover his energy for 2 posts after the ability cool down..', do you mean in addition of the four turns/rounds for the cooldown making it 2 + 4 = 6 turns to cooldown, or do you mean after the ability starts it's cooldown, meaning the two-turn wait replaces the four-turn cooldown? And seperate to that, does this mean that from now on he can always use this as a passive ability without any turns to wait in trade-off with always having to wait and stand still for two turns instead of one, or does he have to 'activate' this as a manual ability?

Once you have replied, we'll review this again. Just need you to clarify what it is you want a bit further so there's not miscommunication.

[Yukimura]

Alright, it is clear there is some confusion with the information I gave for the previous effects.

1) Thunder Burst: Its use is basically either use the 9 steps of high speed motion to where he wishes or it fades away at the end of the same post it is activated in. What the upgrade is stating is that he no longer has a foot step limit and can go around at high speed until 2 posts end.

2) Blessed Flames of Darkness: The new after effect is like this. He can wait two more posts after the regular 4 post cooldown to safely use the ability again or he can use it immediately, at the cost of the being forced to stand still for 1 post. Technically, the actual countdown is between 4 posts and 6 posts.

[Vincent Valentine]

Okay, I get Thunder Burst now.

So, in addition, that makes sense. But wasn't it if he uses the ability immediately, then he must wait two posts in addition to his four-post cooldown to use it again? Not one? Because using it immediately and standing still for one turn was the old ability as mentioned above?

Please reflect this into your original post, like:

New After Effect: Yukimura's endurance, after his last bout with the warriors of Light, has increased greatly, allowing him to continue fighting after the first time use. If he does not wait and recover his energy for 2 posts in addition after the initial ability cool down, when using it hastily, then he will be strained greatly and not be able to move for 1 post. This state of recovery can allow him to skip the recovery if someone heals him with a spell equivalent or greater than Cura.

[Yukimura]

Ah! Yes yes, that is how it is supposed to read! It is now fixed.

[Vincent Valentine]

Much better and less confusing. Thank you.

1/3 Approved.

[Terra]

2/3Approved

[Larxene]

I think I added that right.... if I did something wrong, pm me. I'll fix it! Thanks! ^^'

3/3 Approved

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