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Post by Claire Lovelace on Jul 15, 2012 23:44:34 GMT -5
Reward Type: Ability Cost 150 munny Reward: Shadow Chakram Assault: Claire's Limit Break. Claire's eyes glow a bright red and her chakrams become enveloped in a dark shroud of shadows and they are thrown at the target. In this state the chakrams become intangible and pass through the targets body. No physical wounds are left from the chakrams strikes but the target feels the pain as if they had physically passed through them. For instance, if the chakram passes through an opponent's arm they would feel the pain as it it had been cut off but the arm would remain fully intact. Each chakram strikes the opponent six times. This ability cannot be negated/evaded/blocked from damage. Cooldown: Once per thread.
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Felix
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Post by Felix on Jul 16, 2012 7:24:36 GMT -5
Only problem I got with this is the tag of "unavoidable". While it is a limit break and one expects such a move to have a higher rate of success than normal, tagging it as such is a bit much. I'm sure most people will take it just out of respect (I certainly would) and considering its unblockable simply cause the chakrams are intangible I think it be fine without being unavoidable as well.
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Post by Claire Lovelace on Jul 16, 2012 8:59:08 GMT -5
Okay, no problem. It's been taken out.
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Beast
Civilian
[M:50]
Who Could Love a Beast?
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Post by Beast on Jul 16, 2012 9:48:53 GMT -5
I'm a little iffy on the feeling the pain as you specifically described, because if they feel the pain as if their arm is cut off, then they'd kinda lose feeling to the arm as well, but that's probably more on a case by case basis of roleplay for when the damage is taken.
Regardless, it's good by me. 1/3 Approved.
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Felix
Civilian
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Post by Felix on Jul 16, 2012 10:09:17 GMT -5
Alrighty everything else seems good to me so you got my approval!
2/3
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Post by Larxene on Jul 24, 2012 15:10:13 GMT -5
Your ability is being approved on V4 and munny has been removed in the process.
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